Post by Latte on Jul 20, 2009 23:55:20 GMT -5
Just to put it out there as to why it it is 'not done', I have troubles describing APPEARANCES, and I need to really think awhile for writing a characters history..Or, if I can just put in 'What? She was born in needleclan and blahblahblah', someone tell me. So hold your horses, it'll be done soon.
Name: Darkpaw
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: NeedleClan
Rank: Apprentice
Age: Maybe around...seven moons.
Short Description: Small she-cat with a tortoiseshell pelt. Holds warm yellow eyes.
Appearance: --- Coming soon.
Personality: Quite shy, she won't talk much. Only someone who's really a really good smooth-talker, or that she seems to 'like', she might come around to speak. Thoughtful, and a fan of the night, she usually plans before doing anything.
History: --- Coming soon.
RP Sample: Darkpaw cautiously stepped out into the open, ears folded back. She had thought about this carefully..what she was gonna do...It may risk all of my hard work in apprenticeship, but..I just gotta know what's going on at the moment. The thought was racing across her head; It..it may also kill me..Wait..maybe I should think about this more-- No, Darkpaw, you've already thought about it enough! the she-cat argued with herself in her head, stepping on a twig. "Mousedung!" The apprentice spat quietly, eyes growing wide as she quickly darted into another bush at the smell of an enemy. Darkpaw thought about what to do once he or she came into sight...But, a familiar, almost nostalgic scent reached her nose......! Where..where have I scent this smell before? Before much longer, the scent disappeared, and without a thought(oddly enough), the young apprentice just dashed off towards camp. Okay Darkpaw, don't do it again..Not yet anyways!
A little note to readers: Uh, okay, that was my LONGEST friggin' post EVER. I'd actually appreciate feedback on it..And for some reason, does it seem like it was a post AT ALL? Oh my.. Also, just to ask BEFORE HAND, if I don't come on in 235963468 days or something, I wouldn't mind if someone dropped me an e-mail or whatever, as I forget these little things sometimes.. I'll finish up the appearance and history of Darkpaw later, (unless the image below can work as the appearance..thing).
I hope you dont mind clicking this link to see what our Darkie looks like!
Name: Darkpaw
Gender: She-Cat
Clan: NeedleClan
Rank: Apprentice
Age: Maybe around...seven moons.
Short Description: Small she-cat with a tortoiseshell pelt. Holds warm yellow eyes.
Appearance: --- Coming soon.
Personality: Quite shy, she won't talk much. Only someone who's really a really good smooth-talker, or that she seems to 'like', she might come around to speak. Thoughtful, and a fan of the night, she usually plans before doing anything.
History: --- Coming soon.
RP Sample: Darkpaw cautiously stepped out into the open, ears folded back. She had thought about this carefully..what she was gonna do...It may risk all of my hard work in apprenticeship, but..I just gotta know what's going on at the moment. The thought was racing across her head; It..it may also kill me..Wait..maybe I should think about this more-- No, Darkpaw, you've already thought about it enough! the she-cat argued with herself in her head, stepping on a twig. "Mousedung!" The apprentice spat quietly, eyes growing wide as she quickly darted into another bush at the smell of an enemy. Darkpaw thought about what to do once he or she came into sight...But, a familiar, almost nostalgic scent reached her nose......! Where..where have I scent this smell before? Before much longer, the scent disappeared, and without a thought(oddly enough), the young apprentice just dashed off towards camp. Okay Darkpaw, don't do it again..Not yet anyways!
A little note to readers: Uh, okay, that was my LONGEST friggin' post EVER. I'd actually appreciate feedback on it..And for some reason, does it seem like it was a post AT ALL? Oh my.. Also, just to ask BEFORE HAND, if I don't come on in 235963468 days or something, I wouldn't mind if someone dropped me an e-mail or whatever, as I forget these little things sometimes.. I'll finish up the appearance and history of Darkpaw later, (unless the image below can work as the appearance..thing).
I hope you dont mind clicking this link to see what our Darkie looks like!
