Post by Lily on Oct 10, 2007 18:02:38 GMT -5
Name: Falconclaw
Gender: Tom, definately tom.
Clan: HiddenClan
Rank: Warrior
Age: 34 moons
Short Description: Orange, black, spotted, striped. Ocean colored eyes. Massive, muscular, stout. Average speed. Exceedingly sharp claws and fangs.
Appearance: The frist thing that would cross your mind when first seeing this tom would be "Huge". He is massive, at least an inch or more taller than any[ tom he has ever encountered. He doesn't exactly fit in with the long and lean average of HiddenClan. This could be an advantage, though, to has such a muscular cat on the side of HiddenClan. One thing you would know about Falcon is that he isn't at all chubby. All of his mass comes from muscle and bone. Not a bit of fat on the tom. His fur is also very short.
If his sheer size isn't enough to scare, his weapons will. His paws are just as big as he is. They are soft, but all know what claws can be unsheathed from them. His claws are so sharp it would send a dog running, as are his fangs. He is a force to be reckoned with, this is for sure.
Looking at him, your reaction would be to run. He has no weaknesses this would seem. Ah, but sharp minds will see through this. You can't be perfect. No cat was ever a perfect warrior. He is strong, and large, but he must give up other things. Speed, agility, flexabilty, and even reaction time. He has slightly less than average speed, for his legs aren't short, but they aren't long, and in orde rto be large and fast, your legs must be long. He had to train hard to reach the speeds he can today. He isn't very agile or flexible, being so big. he can't dodge as well as a small cat, or a cat the can move parts of their body quickly.His reaction time is greater because he needs more time to move, being heavier. This could cause him to take a lot of blows in a battle; a lot more than his fellow warriors.
Though he is big, he isn't so big that he would scare of Clan mates. Actually, some she cats find his size attractive. They can feel secure around him. He is actually quite the handsome fellow if you stop to look beyond his stature.
His pelt is mainly shades or oranges, and dark reds. His main pelt color is a dark red-orange. He has flecks of a quite darker orange throughout his body, mostly consentrated on his sides and below his ears. There is a lighter yellow-orange toward the front of his body, on the back if his neck, and on his cheeks.
He is covered with black stripes and spots, making him look like a miniature leopard-tiger. His black markings at to his intimidating size.
His eyes are a shade of ocean blue-green.
Personality:
Falconclaw is a very strong, determined and moral oriented sort of cat. He isn't easily hurt, angered or broken down. He will always stand up for his rights, and what he believes is right. He would never let you use him or trample on him. He refuses to be anyones tool. He has friends, not masters. He will also stand up for friends if they really need it, though he doesn't like to solve cat's problems for them. He feels almost guilty. "Give a cat a fish and feed him for a day. Teach him to fish, and he will eat for a lifetime."
Falcon is also very loyal. He doesn't have hundreds of friends, but the ones he does have, and will make are forever. You can always trust Falcon to tell you the truth, or stand by you through hard times, even if all are against you. He is a good friend that way.
He isn't much of a talker, and you wouldn't ever consider him to be "hyper". He will talk, but calmly, and will rarely go off on random tangents. He does, however, enojy a good laugh. He will laugh if he finds it funny. Now, don't get me wrong, he isn't anti-social in the least. He likes other cats, and enjoys the company of HiddenClan, he just normally doesn't start the conversation.
Falcon is also very logical and headstrong. He is smart you would say. He doesn't dive into situations without thinking. This could be a weakness, for he is already physically slow. taking time to think may slow him down more, but he does come up with decent ideas, plans and strategies. He thinks a lot, so usually has solutions to every-day and not so every-day problems.
Falcon's biggest flaw is his tendency to sound unconcerned, or insensitive. If you complain to him, he doesn't always know what to say. It may not even come out as sounding sympathetic at all, even if he meant it to. He isn't good with sensitive situations, and can never say what he means. He also has a problem explaining. If he hurts your feelings, he'll often let the guilt haunt him for days before explaining what he really meant to say.
History:
Falcon was born to a mother from DawnClan, and a father that had been born in HiddenClan. There is a story behind this.
You see, his mother, Robinheart, was a warrior of DawnClan. She was a good one. She was loyal, honest. and hard-working. She loved her Clan and everyone in it. She especially loved an orange tom named Autumnclaw. They were going to ask their leader to be mates and to have kits. Robin was going to switch clans. It was for love. They were very, very happy.
One night Robinheart was out on patrol of the borders. She caught the scent of an intruder. she rushed off to investigate. It was late at night, and she doubted the visit was 100% friendly. Robin couldn't find the source at first, then realized it was a Rouge male. She wasn't frightened but ordereed him to leave. He instantly attacked her. The night ended with an injured Robin, who now carried this males kits. Sometime during the attack, Autumn had sensed her danger and had run the rouge off.
Robin was devastated, but Autumn insisted that he still loved her. She went with him to HiddenClan, and robin gave birth to one kit. Autumn claimed falcon as his own, and to this day, only Robin and autumn know of Falcon's true father, not even Falcon himself. Luckily, hi mother was from Dawn, which accounted for his size. robin's parents were very large. Autumn was orange. It turned out perfectly.
Falcon then grew up quite happily. he learned to be a decent mix of his mother an father. He was loyal, devoted, kind and strong, with his own flaws, traits and strengths.
He quickly became an appretice, and worked very hard. He was respected more tha he was feared. He has good friends, and remains loyal to them.
falcon then became a warrior and recieved the name Falconclaw.
He now lives as a warrior in HiddenClan.
RP Sample: See Ravenstar
Gender: Tom, definately tom.
Clan: HiddenClan
Rank: Warrior
Age: 34 moons
Short Description: Orange, black, spotted, striped. Ocean colored eyes. Massive, muscular, stout. Average speed. Exceedingly sharp claws and fangs.
Appearance: The frist thing that would cross your mind when first seeing this tom would be "Huge". He is massive, at least an inch or more taller than any[ tom he has ever encountered. He doesn't exactly fit in with the long and lean average of HiddenClan. This could be an advantage, though, to has such a muscular cat on the side of HiddenClan. One thing you would know about Falcon is that he isn't at all chubby. All of his mass comes from muscle and bone. Not a bit of fat on the tom. His fur is also very short.
If his sheer size isn't enough to scare, his weapons will. His paws are just as big as he is. They are soft, but all know what claws can be unsheathed from them. His claws are so sharp it would send a dog running, as are his fangs. He is a force to be reckoned with, this is for sure.
Looking at him, your reaction would be to run. He has no weaknesses this would seem. Ah, but sharp minds will see through this. You can't be perfect. No cat was ever a perfect warrior. He is strong, and large, but he must give up other things. Speed, agility, flexabilty, and even reaction time. He has slightly less than average speed, for his legs aren't short, but they aren't long, and in orde rto be large and fast, your legs must be long. He had to train hard to reach the speeds he can today. He isn't very agile or flexible, being so big. he can't dodge as well as a small cat, or a cat the can move parts of their body quickly.His reaction time is greater because he needs more time to move, being heavier. This could cause him to take a lot of blows in a battle; a lot more than his fellow warriors.
Though he is big, he isn't so big that he would scare of Clan mates. Actually, some she cats find his size attractive. They can feel secure around him. He is actually quite the handsome fellow if you stop to look beyond his stature.
His pelt is mainly shades or oranges, and dark reds. His main pelt color is a dark red-orange. He has flecks of a quite darker orange throughout his body, mostly consentrated on his sides and below his ears. There is a lighter yellow-orange toward the front of his body, on the back if his neck, and on his cheeks.
He is covered with black stripes and spots, making him look like a miniature leopard-tiger. His black markings at to his intimidating size.
His eyes are a shade of ocean blue-green.
Personality:
Falconclaw is a very strong, determined and moral oriented sort of cat. He isn't easily hurt, angered or broken down. He will always stand up for his rights, and what he believes is right. He would never let you use him or trample on him. He refuses to be anyones tool. He has friends, not masters. He will also stand up for friends if they really need it, though he doesn't like to solve cat's problems for them. He feels almost guilty. "Give a cat a fish and feed him for a day. Teach him to fish, and he will eat for a lifetime."
Falcon is also very loyal. He doesn't have hundreds of friends, but the ones he does have, and will make are forever. You can always trust Falcon to tell you the truth, or stand by you through hard times, even if all are against you. He is a good friend that way.
He isn't much of a talker, and you wouldn't ever consider him to be "hyper". He will talk, but calmly, and will rarely go off on random tangents. He does, however, enojy a good laugh. He will laugh if he finds it funny. Now, don't get me wrong, he isn't anti-social in the least. He likes other cats, and enjoys the company of HiddenClan, he just normally doesn't start the conversation.
Falcon is also very logical and headstrong. He is smart you would say. He doesn't dive into situations without thinking. This could be a weakness, for he is already physically slow. taking time to think may slow him down more, but he does come up with decent ideas, plans and strategies. He thinks a lot, so usually has solutions to every-day and not so every-day problems.
Falcon's biggest flaw is his tendency to sound unconcerned, or insensitive. If you complain to him, he doesn't always know what to say. It may not even come out as sounding sympathetic at all, even if he meant it to. He isn't good with sensitive situations, and can never say what he means. He also has a problem explaining. If he hurts your feelings, he'll often let the guilt haunt him for days before explaining what he really meant to say.
History:
Falcon was born to a mother from DawnClan, and a father that had been born in HiddenClan. There is a story behind this.
You see, his mother, Robinheart, was a warrior of DawnClan. She was a good one. She was loyal, honest. and hard-working. She loved her Clan and everyone in it. She especially loved an orange tom named Autumnclaw. They were going to ask their leader to be mates and to have kits. Robin was going to switch clans. It was for love. They were very, very happy.
One night Robinheart was out on patrol of the borders. She caught the scent of an intruder. she rushed off to investigate. It was late at night, and she doubted the visit was 100% friendly. Robin couldn't find the source at first, then realized it was a Rouge male. She wasn't frightened but ordereed him to leave. He instantly attacked her. The night ended with an injured Robin, who now carried this males kits. Sometime during the attack, Autumn had sensed her danger and had run the rouge off.
Robin was devastated, but Autumn insisted that he still loved her. She went with him to HiddenClan, and robin gave birth to one kit. Autumn claimed falcon as his own, and to this day, only Robin and autumn know of Falcon's true father, not even Falcon himself. Luckily, hi mother was from Dawn, which accounted for his size. robin's parents were very large. Autumn was orange. It turned out perfectly.
Falcon then grew up quite happily. he learned to be a decent mix of his mother an father. He was loyal, devoted, kind and strong, with his own flaws, traits and strengths.
He quickly became an appretice, and worked very hard. He was respected more tha he was feared. He has good friends, and remains loyal to them.
falcon then became a warrior and recieved the name Falconclaw.
He now lives as a warrior in HiddenClan.
RP Sample: See Ravenstar